Orcish ring mail - Revision history

Umbire the Phantom: cite starting knowledge

2024-05-24T18:35:59Z

cite starting knowledge

Umbire the Phantom: formatting + copyedit pass

2024-05-24T18:00:20Z

formatting + copyedit pass

Umbire the Phantom: variant organization, word choice

2024-03-13T13:23:00Z

variant organization, word choice

Umbire the Phantom: /* Generation */ stores, starting knowledge

2024-03-13T13:18:14Z

‎Generation: stores, starting knowledge

JASON10668: Add languages template.

2024-03-13T01:43:30Z

Add languages template.

Umbire the Phantom: /* Variants */ word choice

2023-10-25T00:47:44Z

‎Variants: word choice

Umbire the Phantom: /* EvilHack */ word choice

2023-08-05T01:49:05Z

‎EvilHack: word choice

Umbire the Phantom: pothole

2023-08-05T00:30:45Z

pothole

Umbire the Phantom: potholes

2023-08-05T00:27:30Z

potholes

Umbire the Phantom: ref

2023-08-05T00:25:24Z

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 ==Generation==
-[[Orc (starting race)|Orcish]] characters start the game with knowledge of orcish ring mail's appearance. Orcish [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
+[[Orc (starting race)|Orcish]] characters start the game with knowledge of orcish ring mail's appearance.{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|860|nethack=3.6.7}} Orcish [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
 In addition to random generation, general [[store]]s and used armor dealerships sell orcish ring mail.

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 ==Description==
-When worn, orcish ring mail grants 2 base [[AC]] and [[MC]]1.
+While worn, orcish ring mail grants 2 base [[AC]] and [[MC]]1.
 ==Strategy==
 Orcish ring mail is as heavy as standard ring mail for one less point of [[AC]], and orcish Barbarians should swap it for whatever armor they can find as soon as possible. For Barbarians and other roles alike, even [[leather armor]] of the same enchantment is preferable: it weighs 100 [[aum]] less, and does not interfere with [[spellcasting]] for magic-focused characters.
 ==Variants==
-Some variants may give orcs (including the player) an AC bonus for wearing orcish ring mail.
+Some variants may give orcs (including orcish player characters) an AC bonus for wearing orcish ring mail.
 ===UnNetHack===
-In [[UnNetHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them, including player orcs.
+In [[UnNetHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them, including orcish characters.
 ===dNethack===
-In [[dNetHack]], orcish chain mail grants 1 AC, 1 [[DR]] and MC1 when worn, and its weight is reduced to 125 aum (half of its weight in vanilla ''NetHack'').
+In [[dNetHack]] and [[notdNetHack]], orcish chain mail grants 1 AC, 1 [[DR]] and MC1 when worn, and its weight is reduced to 125 aum (half of its weight in vanilla ''NetHack'').
 ===EvilHack===
-In [[EvilHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them, including player orcs.
+In [[EvilHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them, including orcish characters.
 Orcish chain mail can be created at a [[Forge (dungeon feature)|forge]] by combining an [[orcish helm]] and an [[orcish shield]].

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 ==Generation==
-All [[Orc (starting race)|orcish]] characters start the game with knowledge of orcish ring mail's appearance. Orcish [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
+[[Orc (starting race)|Orcish]] characters start the game with knowledge of orcish ring mail's appearance. Orcish [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
 In addition to random generation, general [[store]]s and used armor dealerships sell orcish ring mail.
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 ==Variants==
 Some variants may give orcs (including the player) an AC bonus for wearing orcish ring mail.
 ===UnNetHack===
 In [[UnNetHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them, including player orcs.
 ===EvilHack===
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 Orcish chain mail can be created at a [[Forge (dungeon feature)|forge]] by combining an [[orcish helm]] and an [[orcish shield]].
 ==References==

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 ==Generation==
-All [[Orc (starting race)|orcish]] [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
+All [[Orc (starting race)|orcish]] characters start the game with knowledge of orcish ring mail's appearance. Orcish [[Barbarian]]s start the game with orcish ring mail in place of standard [[ring mail]].{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|46|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Barbarian starting inventory}}{{refsrc|src/u_init.c|220|nethack=3.6.7|comment=Racial substitutions for orcish characters}}
 ==Description==

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 In [[EvilHack]], orcish ring mail grants +1 AC to orcish monsters that wear them.
-You can create orcish chain mail at a [[Forge (dungeon feature)|forge]] by combining an [[orcish helm]] and an [[orcish shield]].
+Orcish chain mail can be created at a [[Forge (dungeon feature)|forge]] by combining an [[orcish helm]] and an [[orcish shield]].
 ==References==

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-'''Orcish ring mail''' is a type of [[body armor]] that appears in ''[[NetHack]]'', It is made of iron, and appears as '''crude ring mail''' when unidentified.
+'''Orcish ring mail''' is a type of [[body armor]] that appears in ''[[NetHack]]'', It is made of [[iron]], and appears as '''crude ring mail''' when unidentified.
 ==Generation==

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 You can create orcish chain mail at a [[Forge (dungeon feature)|forge]] by combining an [[orcish helm]] and an [[orcish shield]].
 {{nethack-367}}
 [[Category:Body armor]]
 [[Category:Orcish items|Ring mail]]