Difference between revisions of "Talk:Religion"

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I think the introduction should be extended, its far too short.

There is also some metadiscourse that should be eliminated for the article to sound more professional.--CakeNinja (talk) 19:13, 17 January 2016 (UTC)

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		+	There is also some metadiscourse that should be eliminated for the article to sound more professional.--[[User:CakeNinja\|CakeNinja]] ([[User talk:CakeNinja\|talk]]) 19:13, 17 January 2016 (UTC)