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:"The D&D Asmodeus is a handsome, red-eyed, dark-skinned and dark-haired humanoid bearing two small horns and clad in very expensive clothing." | :"The D&D Asmodeus is a handsome, red-eyed, dark-skinned and dark-haired humanoid bearing two small horns and clad in very expensive clothing." | ||
-_- Any one has a problem with the English of this phrase? (there's an edit conflict with some one).--[[User:Quantum Immortal|Quantum Immortal]] ([[User talk:Quantum Immortal|talk]]) 19:57, 30 September 2015 (UTC) | -_- Any one has a problem with the English of this phrase? (there's an edit conflict with some one).--[[User:Quantum Immortal|Quantum Immortal]] ([[User talk:Quantum Immortal|talk]]) 19:57, 30 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Dark haired and skinned might flow better. [[User:Jubilex|Jubilex]] ([[User talk:Jubilex|talk]]) 21:35, 30 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 21:35, 30 September 2015
- "The D&D Asmodeus is a handsome, red-eyed, dark-skinned and dark-haired humanoid bearing two small horns and clad in very expensive clothing."
-_- Any one has a problem with the English of this phrase? (there's an edit conflict with some one).--Quantum Immortal (talk) 19:57, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
Dark haired and skinned might flow better. Jubilex (talk) 21:35, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
